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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I'm still stained from Days before. unable to Find a cure. roaming the World from shore to shore Wandering why, what for? I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I'm in the same boat...haven't found any answers yet..good luck in your quest... ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Are you lost too? This is really a great poem. The shortness gives it an effect...not sure exactly what effect but one all the same. Good luck to ya, hasta luego  Bel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very good poem. I loved it. I was surprised that it ended so suddenly cuz i was expecting it to be bigger but that sudden end just made this huge impact. Good!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Ah yes, everyone is searching for something, so everyone should be able to relate to this. Well done, I like this poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
wow i'm not the only one that feels lost right now! surprise surprise. great poem, it was really cool Curlz "I feel fine enough I guess considering everything's a mess" Barenaked Ladies |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
many people can relate to this, it is so well expresed. very good poem. i really think its very good. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jeremiah~ Its so good to see you back and with a wonderful piece of work!!!Looking for answers is the hardest things to do cuz it takes so long just to find them...So dont go looking, they will come to you... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
WOW, you have some great power. Must you please share this wisdom with the rest of us? Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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