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Teen Poetry #3

Burning Love

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

0 posted 2000-10-26 07:14 PM

Her gaze always yearns
For his gentle, sweet eyes
Got no wish to learn
Of love's dark demise
No! She shan't discern
Of the truth; can't be wise
So stay. Let her burn
In the wildfire of lies.

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

1 posted 2000-10-26 07:52 PM

Great one!

I like the style. I think I'm too tired to get the whole meaning of that...maybe I will when I'm more awake. But anyway, it's really good..is it about you?
Bel

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2000-10-27 02:23 PM

Hey. It's kinda about me, I just wrote and it came out...I guess there must be something in my past that sparked it... Thanks for your reply.

~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-27 04:42 PM

This was great, short but sweet. I just hope you seriously dont burn....in any sense of the word.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-27 06:15 PM

I like short poems, they always seem dramatic. Maybe that's because you know the writer has such little space to spread such a deep meaning. That's what I felt with this one, good job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

5 posted 2000-10-27 07:35 PM

Great peom! i liked this one, it was short and simple and to the point. great job!

Curlz

"I feel fine enough I guess
considering everything's a mess"
Barenaked Ladies

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