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jytree
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0 posted 2000-10-27 11:57 AM


Things inside my great big heart,
Tells me that were not far apart,
Love live inside of me,
Could you be the one to set it free,

Life have weird twists and turns,
But it are the people with strong hearts that get burned,
My heart been used like bad bait,
So that is why I get tired of us preption H.

Life is cruel in so many ways,
But you just have to fight throught it to live a proud day,
It is people with small hearts and even smaller brains that think they are number one,
But the only reason in that is that they carry a gun,
Some people think that they are God or maybe his son,
That is about as funny as someone trying to seduce a nun!.

Why do people live like this,
People are blinded by greed that they don't notice the ruling of the iron fist,
Why Do I live in a world that doesn't care,
Are people that unaware that barney makes more sense that them,

Why should I be put to the test,
When I could sit of my but like some of the rest,
Mentally I thought I was a fluke,
But some girls got a hold of me and made me rubuke,.

Life sucks lets just face it,
yet when love come please embrace it,
Love is shouldn't be taken lightly,
Or you might wind up on your face slightly,

Well here I go,
Time to close,
I hoped you liked it indeed,
But just remember stupid people shouldn't breed.



early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
But socially dead-Dot animantics.

Poems are F.U.B.U
( for us by us.)----ME


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1 posted 2000-10-27 01:54 PM



  Hey. This was all so true, and the ending really finished it off well. Great job!! Stay cool!

  ~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.


jytree
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2 posted 2000-10-27 02:01 PM


THANKS star well as most people will guess throughout this poem iis that it is very silly like the creator of it.

early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
But socially dead-Dot animantics.

Poems are F.U.B.U
( for us by us.)----ME


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3 posted 2000-10-27 04:18 PM


Well this was great....poems are FTBM.....poems For Them By Monkeys



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-10-27 06:10 PM


"Some people think that they are God or maybe his son,
That is about as funny as someone trying to seduce a nun!."

Hahaha, I think that part seemed the funniest to me for some reason   You have some good thoughts in this poem, thanks for sharing them!!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

curlygurly
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5 posted 2000-10-27 07:43 PM


This was REALLY good! i thought it was pretty twisted but it was kinda funny too hehe! great poem keep it up!  
Curlz


"I feel fine enough I guess
considering everything's a mess"
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