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Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2000-10-26 12:22 PM

As we lay down togather
You hold me oh so tight
Your gentle arms around me
Making me feel just right

I look at you so sweetly
You gaze right back at me
I smile at you and wonder
If this is meant to be

I kiss you on your lips
You kiss me right back
I feel so happy when im with you
There are so many things you dont lack

I hope some day we'll be togather
You make me feel so good
I hope that everything turns out just right
The way that destiny should

~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

1 posted 2000-10-26 07:31 AM

That was good. I know what you are feeling. Well I hope it all works out well for you. Great poem, keep writing!

~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-10-26 01:32 PM

Awww this was so sweet...Sounds like this guy is really special...Keep him!!!Good work...Thanks for sharing it...

P.S.~Good choice for the title...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-26 04:33 PM

Yea this is great. A very sweet poem like erin said. You go girl! Hahaha ok....keep it up though.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2000-10-26 07:43 PM

Aww!! That's SO sweet!!

I hope everything works out for you two. Good luck keep up the writing
Bel

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-10-27 04:57 PM

Well done, this is such a nice poem. The feeling behind it is great

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

6 posted 2000-10-27 09:10 PM

A very heart felt poem and so sweet! Best of luck to you and your 'destiny' man!!

p.s. you should show him

*Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference*

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