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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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This was actually a song that I decided is, well....a poem. Now The day I met you, I knew I'd love you. Since you left me, I've had no other. The only truth I know, is I don't know you now. The times you held me and stood beside me. The words you told me, I took inside me. The only difference is, I don't know you now. I can see it in your eyes, feel it on your skin- the spark I made is gone that lit your fire within. The only choice we have is to love again; so I can know you now. Let us sing in lover's past, burn our fears away- to show what love can be and live another day. But when the smoke has cleared and tomorrow becomes today, once again your feelings start to fade away. Look into my eyes and please just try to say.... I want to know you now. I know I love you now. I think I know you now. Jeremy D. Halstead '98 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
This is really beautiful...I'm happy you posted it. It really makes sense in a lot of relationships, or at least when they end. Keep writing! "Of all those arts in which the wise excel, Nature's chief masterpiece is writing well." ~Essay on Poetry, John Sheffield "Those who trust in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint." ~Isaiah 40:3 |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Once again...another beautiful poem. I love it. Keep writing!! Luv ya, Danielle  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Songs are words set to music, but poems are words that create their own music. And this is a beautiful poem, my friend. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jeremy~as always, I'm inspired by your words and captivated by your emotion! Nicely done! Keep it up Love Always~*~Pryncess Jess~*~  ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes another great piece. keep it up I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well what can i say...i really enjoy reading your poems...you write really well...and i admire you for that...you always have beautiful poems to post...compared to mine...i give you props for this poem... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jeremy, As alwayz you put forth the effort and delivered another masterpiece. Hope to see more in the future. TAP2 |
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LIL.MAMA Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 32 |
THAT WAS SWEET KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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