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CLBinLOVE
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Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2000-10-24 05:41 PM



it flows
it carries itself in the air
it has a pulse
but is no more alive than your hair

it is mathamatical
yet it is also very personal
it cand be harsh and rough
or smooth, with no bumps at all

it brings people together
or can put them on ends
it can be made by one
or put together by a group of kids

it can carry lots
ideas, words, feelings
meanings, thoughts, souls
it can be made from someone dreaming

what is it?
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let tie fighting words lie
let the candle light die
let the sun come up
let the same imply
~EvE 6


[This message has been edited by CLBinLOVE (edited 10-24-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-10-24 06:08 PM



  Hey. Oh boy, I have no clue...uhh..umm..anyways, it was a kickin' poem, whatever the answer is hehe...keep it up and stay cool k??k!

  ~Carly

The grinstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.

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2 posted 2000-10-24 06:35 PM


I have no idea, but im going to guess a SOUL.



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-10-25 01:43 PM


I read this a couple times, have thought about it, and have decided that I just can't figure it out!  But maybe someone else can.  You know, I may have to try writing some riddle poems, they're really cool....even though I don't know this one   

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

CLBinLOVE
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Hilton Head, SC, USA
4 posted 2000-10-25 04:16 PM


well ya know if you dont know it and waht to know the awnser you can email me *clb85118@aol.com*  lol after writing all these riddles noone has emailed me yet! hehe

let tie fighting words lie
let the candle light die
let the sun come up
let the same imply
~EvE 6

curlygurly
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Posts 276
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5 posted 2000-10-25 07:43 PM


geee clb i wonder what it could be!!!!! hmmmmmm gee i dunno but i bet i know one thing that has to do with it.... could it be katie???? anyway good riddle
Curlz


"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias


Erin
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6 posted 2000-10-26 02:10 AM


I dont know why but I am thinking love...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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