Saga of the Archdutchy of Happiness

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Teen Poetry #3

Saga of the Archdutchy of Happiness

Morouxshi San
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since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-10-25 08:22 PM

i was experimenting, if you will, and i did finished the "Saga of the Archdutchy of Happiness". it is one poem with 6 stanzas, but i consider each stanza a poem in its own right, try to analyze them as such and then as a whole. sorry for complicating your lifes...

-=Saga of the Archdutchy of Happiness=-

|-=lost=-

What is it that i cant find?
where is this road?
a wrong turn here,
a wrong turn there.
i live my life and end up nowhere.

|-=scattered=-

broken into pieces.
shipped to diffrent places.
my feelings were excomunicated
from my senses.
i as a self, i am nowhere.

|-=searched=-

acting in automation.
unplug me, disconnect me.
take me away from this,
the cold, dark place of dreams.
take me to your nowhere.

|-=re-joined=-

travel with me,
show me and teach me.
join me together,
rebuild me from the nothing
and erect me in your everywhere.

|-=forgotten=-

take me to that mountain,
do what they did.
attack me! explode me!
delete my memory of the plains of fantasia,
that plague your everywhere.

|-=empowered=-

that was it then?
i was taken and forgotten.
being but a toy,
i finished with the society of nothing.
hail to the archduke of everywhere.

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San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

[This message has been edited by Morouxshi San (edited 10-25-2000).]

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-10-25 09:40 PM

Hey. I was wrong once again...anyways, this was superb. It made me think. I hate thinking!!! Oh well, it's a good thing to do once in a while. Take me to your no where. That was kickin'....

~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-25 09:42 PM

San, this kicked major butt. I love how every stanza could be a poem in itself and has a title of it's own, yet all together it makes complete sense. I loved this so much dude........so much.

Viva la revolucion!!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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