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Suteki New Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 5 |
When one has been hurt What can they do? When one has been betrayed Whom can they turn to? When one has their heart broken How can it be mended? When one loses everything dear to them What's left to live for? When one has had all hope destroyed Is there anyone to help? If one has given everything to help others And instead has had their soul slashed If one had trusted another And instead was turned away If everyone has a reason to live Then what is mine? If one needs help of comfort Will there be someone to give it? If one has been harmed by those she cares for Then tell me... What can she do? Keep pent up emotions inside Hope things will get better When they most likely won't? --- Hello everyone! Just thought I'll tell everyone that no, everything's fine in my life now...these are poems I wrote about three months ago. But right now everything is (semi) fine. Except for school and such...^_^ Just the Algebra grade that's bringing me down. I hope to become friends with a lot of you soon. ^.~ ~S. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
a lot of these questions you asked really surround us and make us think a lot, glad to hear your "semi-fine". Keep up the good work! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well you want to be my friend? *becomes your friend* SEE!!!!!! WE're friends!!! Ok well the poem was great, love the title. Great title and poem along with it. Good format. hope to see more.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hi there, great poem. I know how that feels..not word for word but the basic effect of it. Ugh algebra! Algebra sux!! Great one, good luck, keep your chin up and smile  Bel |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I WANNA BE UR FRIEND TOOOOO!!!!!! This poem was awesome, I loved the questions... well keep it up and stay cool. ~Carly The grinstone of life can either wear us down or change us, depending on what we're made of. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well I liked this style, questions in poetry always make the reader think more because it directly relates them to the writing. But why are you not keeping your grades up? Algebra isn't too hard, come on  you know deep inside you love it. Ok, maybe not. But if you pretend you like it you'll go at it with a better attitude. Just make yourself believe that it is fun. Alright, saying that probably shot my chances of being your friend, but hey, give me a break "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
awwwwww how sweet....i loved the first half a lot and i liked the other half to its just i fell in love with the first part. *~BRANDEN~* "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
These questions really made me think...even about something that i'd rather not. Some of the questions i couldnt even find an answer to but i guess thats ok. Really good poem, it really made me think =o)Keep em comin, i loved this one! |
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