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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Here are my tears, Watch them fall, As a I become a wonder wall, No amount of love can heal this pain, So I live my life in so much vain, Living each day anew, Feeling like something out of the mysterous brew, What did I do wrong???, Was it some of my fears, As that plays on I find another tear, Wonder wall, Wonder wall, What secrets do you hold, Is it so much to leave me in the cold, Why are you here???, What purpose do you bring, Stopping me with a ring, Wonder wall, Wonder wall, You hurt me so, Yet you help me when I am down so low. early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. Poems are F.U.B.U ( for us by us.)----ME |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
oops [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, I like this one, it seemed to flow good in my mind. Anyway, good job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well i HAD to read it because of the title. (Wonderwall by Oasis...) but i liked it, very much... San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes, San Does love Oasis......great poem though...  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Jay, yet another great work out of your head! I loved it! Stop by and see me when you have the chance. K?~*~SCG~*~ |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Thanks everybody like scg said just another one I pulled out of my head, Yes I do know that oasis published The song wonder wall that is where I got the name :hehe:. but thanks early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. Poems are F.U.B.U ( for us by us.)----ME |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Grreat poem Jay!  That is where I get all my poems in the first place. Out of my head and on to the paper (or screen in this case ) Great work guy!"Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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