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CLBinLOVE
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since 2000-06-04
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Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2000-10-23 10:22 PM


showing their power
through a blanket of black
they'll stay for a while
till their replacement comes back

they are leaders
they illumiate the way
they can guide eyes, or people
or ships from bay to bay

they are works beautiful
yet to most unnoticed
if we only saw them every thousand years
they might strike in the heart bliss

what are they??


let tie fighting words lie
let the candle light die
let the sun come up
let the same inply
~EvE 6

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sweetcollege_girl
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1 posted 2000-10-24 09:35 AM


I'm thinking stars. Great riddle of a poem!  

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Erin
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2 posted 2000-10-24 11:11 AM


I would say stars too...But like a certain kind of star...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-10-24 04:21 PM


Yeah, I'm gonna go with stars too.  And I like these riddle poems, they're creative and fun

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CLBinLOVE
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since 2000-06-04
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Hilton Head, SC, USA
4 posted 2000-10-24 05:32 PM


geez and i tried my hardest to make this one hard and not hint too much at the awnser!! and YOU GUYS STILL GET IT RIGHT!! ugh im gonna have to make it a really abstract awnser next time!!
*throws up hands and walks off mumbling and shaking head*
hehe
CLB

let tie fighting words lie
let the candle light die
let the sun come up
let the same imply
~EvE 6

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5 posted 2000-10-24 06:27 PM


Yea stars was pretty easy.....pisses me off i got the first one wrong....i coulda sworn it was love......



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