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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
life life is some bizzare dream that is a faked reality life is what you believe and live day in and day out life is a mixture of ends and beginnings life can be everything you have ever dreamed of good or bad in one moment, like a dream, life can change from gloriously rewarding to a punishing hell in one moment, an eternity of generations can be detirmined in one momemt, life is decidedly ended for a poor soul in the wrong place at the wrong time in the next, life is beginning for an infant destined to live a grand life of money and power an hour after that, that infant is also decidedly dead, after someone got a beer and keys... life is random and the point of life is to live your best always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Life is also scary, and hard, and depressing. Then, of course, it's invigorating, and exciting, and challenging. Then you end up doing things you painfully regret...oh how I know that one well. All you want is to be happy, but you hardly ever know what can truely get you there! It kinda sux sometimes. Keep up the good work.... Jenn< !signature--> "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Like it now, liked it earlier. It's great really. I like the pattern...or lack thereof  . And I agree with the poem...can't think of much else to tell you. So keep this writing up alright....hmm.....Bel |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Oooops!! Hit reply twice  [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this rocked....... oh yea and dude what is the answer to your riddle? If you dont wanna tell nobody just look at my reply and tell me if i was right and e-mail me. Ok thanks!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"life life is some bizzare dream that is a faked reality" I really like the beginning of this for some reason, and i think the whole poem is really good. Very well expressed feelings about this! "life is random and the point of life is to live your best" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
good perspective on life, i especially liked: "life is a mixture of ends and beginnings, life can be everything you have ever dreamed of" excellent poem! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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