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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Here's a new one...I was inspired..by some certain people...and by Dido, who under strange circumstances, I now like listening to. It kind of dumb, I know, but please read. Bel Indecisive I can't decide Do I stay Do I go Oh please Don't let this show I can't jump I'm scared to fall Will I hit the bottom Ruin it all I can't leave Scared of leaving something behind I can't stay Have I lost my mind I can't let go Risk loosing control I can't hold on Would that eat away at my soul I can't breathe The walls might close in I can't hold my breath Can I wait for things to begin I can't stay awake Too much for my eyes to see I can't sleep What will haunt me I can't cry Letting myself seem weak I can't laugh What reason do I seek I can’t talk Scared to say something wrong I can't stay silent Have I been that way too long I can't go on Scared of what I might have to see I can't turn back Resist the force pulling me I can't decide The things I should have already knew So I could use a little help Tell me what do I do -This is dedicated to my boyfriend...why? I'm not sure  ...reply please?- |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this was awesome, i love the indecisivness, maybe thats why its called indecisive!!!  this had a neat style of rhythm too jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
wow well its a little deap for my sedated state but i think i get it....where are you staying or going, if its from life, please dont go! *swallows* geez i read it 3 times and i still dont know what to say...besides: i love you always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
wow well its a little deap for my sedated state but i think i get it....where are you staying or going, if its from life, please dont go! *swallows* geez i read it 3 times and i still dont know what to say...besides: i love you always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
*Blushing* Jeremy- Thanks Yep that's why I called it Indecisive CLB- *Majorly blushing* ahem ahem well I guess that's no secret anymore is it? I didn't mean it as suicidal...like everything it's open to interpretation........... Bel |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Excellent poem...it says a lot and i love the form in which you chose to write it in. It flowed beautifully. Keep up the good work, i really enjoyed this one!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on expression. Anyway it seems everybody liked it and i can see why.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"I can't stay Have I lost my mind" Yes, you have. j/k, sheesh Anyway, I like it, the style's neat and.....I just like it!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is very well written. I really like it. Great job Isabel...keep sharing more I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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