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Losing Love....
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Losing Love.... |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
"Losing Love" I went out for a while Then broke up then went out for 6 months Said I had enough with him He said "why" I say "because" He looks so sad I look so sad and we cry But then he starts flirting with me I flirt with him Could I take him back in my life No I cannot it's to hard "I want you back" he says I say "NO" Losing Love in David..... ~Min~  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was good, but sad that you lost love...well put a smile on your face... ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I love the way you wrote this!!! It's very good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a very nice style. I liked it tons. I hope to see mor eof your writing!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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