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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
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0 posted 2000-10-28 11:05 AM


"Losing Love"
I went out for a while
Then broke up then went out for 6 months
Said I had enough with him
He said "why" I say "because"
He looks so sad
I look so sad and we cry
But then he starts flirting with me
I flirt with him
Could I take him back in my life
No I cannot it's to hard
"I want you back" he says
I say "NO"
Losing Love in David.....
~Min~  



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1 posted 2000-10-28 12:50 PM



  Hey. This was good, but sad that you lost love...well put a smile on your face...

  ~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.


Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-10-28 04:11 PM


I love the way you wrote this!!!  It's very good

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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3 posted 2000-10-28 11:26 PM


This was a very nice style. I liked it tons. I hope to see mor eof your writing!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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