Teen Poetry #3 |
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For all of us set apart |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
For all of us set apart, Open you eyes your really sitting in the dark, Open you eyes to a work art, Where I can live in your heart and yours in mine therefor we will never be apart, Give love a chance for when times are right, You will have someone that you can hold tight, Kiss him and say goodnight, For when the time is right, Day will become night, Nothing will matter, Except being together, Will you be ready when love come, Or will you sit on you duff feeling dumb, I hear the one crying for tha true love, Thus the father will set you a dove, A bud is hard to like, But when it blooms you will be thinking So just hold on a little bit longer, Your love is come comming, Be paciente a little longer. |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Regardless of the few spelling errors, this was a great piece. Keep up the great work, and happy writing!! ~Carly I'm nobody, who are you? Are you nobody too? Then theres a pair of us-dont tell! They'd banish us, you know... |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Me gusto mucho.....keep writing ![]() "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Some good thoughts here, I like your poem ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Sorryb about the spelling errors in it when I wrote I wasn't think about them them you dopey & lake walker and other for your relpys.personally I wrote this for a friend in need early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. Poems are F.U.B.U ( for us by us.)----ME |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'll keep your thoughts in here in mind. very beautiful write jytree, keep it up and keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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