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That man... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I keep having flashes of what we used to have... I was never quite sure what it was. I miss spending my days with you... I'm sorry I rejected you. I thought I didn't need you, I knew you'd never really leave me. But, now you're far away and I miss you. Damn, I wish you'd stayed. You were never quite upfront with me, You'd never ask me in a million years; Just to figure out if I felt it for you. I thought I knew you needed me, you'd be here always. You're "always" faded rather fast, Where'd you go off to? Here I sit, all alone; wondering who to blame more. Myself and my rotten feelings? Or you and your stubborn nature.... "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was really good..I like the way you talked about always.."You're "always" faded rather fast" boy have I learned that..this was great..happy writing... ~Carly The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks for the reply! Yea, "always" is never what it appears.  Sadly....Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great post! Thanks for sharing this with us  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I also like that line about "always" fading fast, it's really good. The whole poem tells how you feel very well, great writing! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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