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Missing Bliss
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Missing Bliss |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Missing Bliss: A time gap frozen. I live to die no more. New heavens to gaze upon. It was all a folklore. Wandering fake plateau's. The consequences of bliss. It's all that I've lost today. It's all that I miss.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Javi, you continue to amaze me. Tootelz, and hope that rain clears up soon... ~Carly The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
can it be? dope has a new dawn? a sun that can revive the dead blossoms? can it be? that the earth stood still? dope found his way in this crazy maze? San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, wonderful job writing this poem Dopey. I have noticed this style a lot lately, I like it. Short enough to get the point out but not too short that it loses anything. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job dopey! Your thoughts were expressed wonderfully! I fully enjoyed this one! Keep posting.....we love you here! "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Great poem, I really liked that. I don't know what it was about that, but something just draws me to it. Nice work, keep writing! Luv, Sweetstuff< !signature--> ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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