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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I gaze at the pages, deeply interested by the contents laid before me Circling or staring the products that I like and not for a single moment thinking that I won't get it "Maybe someday," I say optimisticly But it bothers me to know that all the pretty girls at school are likely to have these outfits I wear confidence like a dress, I just wish I had the shoes to go with it Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
this is an awsome poem i LOVED it and i can totaly relate..........and hun you can borrow my shoes anytime you want! heheeh  Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~ The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
I loved this. It struck a chord with me, I don't know what, it just has this "thing" that makes me like it. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing. |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I love your poem. I think you did a wounderful job. I hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
girl you want to know what i think of those girls??? that wear all the top brands that are expensive...that they are covering up something maybe their pain by buying clothes that are so much money...as if spending money helps there prblems go away...i have a friend who does that...well this was a great poem...i really liked it... P.S.~~~what size do you wear and what color would you like your shoes in???? ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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JR Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 22morris il |
i love it. so many good thoughts in this poem great job! JR "two roads diverged in a wood and I... I took the one less traveled by... ...And that has made all of the difference." --Robert Frost |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you all so much for your replies! I'm glad you liked it.  Jen ~ lol...thanks for the offer hun but I think mine are good enough for me Erin ~ Thanks for your input...and I know whatcha mean...girls like that come a dime a dozen where I live...and I wear a size 8 and as for color..well...my favorite pair of sneakers were bright orange and my favorite heels were plats with silver sequins (I'm not a freak I swear) so that tells you something right there lol... Thanks again! LoVe Ya LoTz, Angel < !signature--> Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well your in my shoe size range but i dont have any orange in stock just yet...LOL and i dont think your a freak for liking silver platforms...i had worn a pair to my prom this year...so if i think your a freak then i must be one myself too!!! by the way where are you from???? < !signature--> ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
lol Erin...we can both be freaks. I live in Mary-land (I know it's not spelled that way...that's just the way I say it..lol) but we're likely to move to Tennessee within the next year. Where do you live? btw - I have that icq thing if you ever want to talk to me through that. Angel < !signature--> Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, I really liked this one I just love the end:I wear confidence like a dress, I just wish I had the shoes to go with it |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very powerful and optimistic words here! I like your additude! Keep up the great work. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
girl who cares if we are freaks!!! i am from chicago...i have the icq thing too so next time we are both on ill talk to you...ok LOL we are talking to each other through replies to your poem!!! < !signature--> ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey girl...just remember this: "It's not the dress that makes the girl. It's the girl that makes the dress!!!" Keep ya head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
First off i really don't think what you wear makes a difference.....so those girls with all the expensive clothes could be nice chicks ya know? Just by saying all this that your all saying is generalizing people who slide into the conformity of fashion look as if they were COMPLETELY bad....or "selfish" how this poem states it to be. Sure SOME are.....but lets not stereotype. If people looked at how i dressed.....they'd think i were this pot smoking, skater. So yea...... but anyway good poem and the ending rocked.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Dopey_Dope...I wasn't saying that the girls with the expensive clothes were selfish or anything like that....in fact no one did. Erin and I agreed on a theoretical opinion but that's all. I meant that I was selfish....I didn't state that any particular clique was seflish through this poem. Thanks anyway. < !signature--> In order to be good one must know evil. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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