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Have You Ever...? |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Have you ever lied to someone, Or felt something that shouldnt be there? Have you ever known that you should, But you honestly didnt care? Were you ever told you were missed, And said you felt the same. But really in the back of your mind, You couldnt think of the last time you spoke their name? Have you ever watched the boy of your dreams, Slowly walk away? Wishing in a silent voice, That you want nothing more then for him to stay? Have you ever left your feelings untouched, And never let them be heard? Or got hurt the same way millions of times, And never actually learned? Have you ever felt the sudden urge, To end all thats bad. You couldnt take your life anymore, You became overwhelmingly sad? Have you ever wished to stop the tears, But they keep strolling down. Went to stop your friend from walking away, But when you opened your mouth you couldnt make a sound? Have you ever wished to close out the world, Make everyone go away? Have you ever wished, Wished for a better day? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think this was very well written and formatted. Great job on the expression and the answer to your question....yes i have.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
hey, this was a really gr8 poem. i luved it!  its some things i can really relate to ey. yeps, it was gr8! *aplauses ya* Luv Jo xoxoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
wow..this one hits at home. this is really one of my favorites now. is it ok if i print it out? cause this soo describes me. well neways...keep up the great writing ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey guys! Thanks for you reply's i'm glad that you liked it. And Feel free to print out any of my poems DancinQueen. Thanx again for your reply's! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow that was great!! I can't think of too much else to tell you....but keep it up it's really good Bel  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem really makes the reader take a close look at themselves and their life. Nice job with this!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Simply outstanding...It's nice too read a poem that opens our eyes once in a while. Thanks so much for sharing this. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
this probably isnt worth posting, because i know everyone else is thinkin the same thing but....WOW always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
every line i read, i thought about it and tried to think of something that ive done that i shouldnt, a real eye opening poem, thanks for sharing jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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