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LoveLess1 New Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 5 |
Without you, my life wouldn't be complete. Your are the one who always makes me smile. I don't know what to do when you are not around. The one and only thing i think about is you making me happier that i've ever been in my life. All i want to do is spend the rest of my life with you. And without you i don't know what i'd do. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Beautiful poem...very heartfelt and pure.  Angel Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a sweet poem...good work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
What a wounderful poem. good job |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Short but really sweet. I'd die to find a girl that writes like the one's here in passions. Actually, I'd die to just find someone who writes at all. keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this was good. Short but to the point. Great job.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem tells how you feel very well, great job on it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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