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2" Much Love |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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Like a flowing river hhis words wash over me touching me deep within,and stirring somethign in my soul. His voice is like a beautiful hymm,or a gentle breeze blowing thru the trees it soothes my confused heart He makes me feel like im worth it His words are truthfull and his heart is pure He has the best intentions,he leaves me craving more But still theres things he can't understand like why i never smile and tears run down my face He doesnt realize, and probably never will,they are the effects of him Beacuse i have a boyfriend....and i cant keep them both my heart is breaking,im in love with 2 boys.... The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Well written. I think you did a great job. I know some of us have to make a very hard choice. I think you should listen your heart and you should choose one of them. well I hope things work out for you and good luck! I hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jen~~~dont you just hate it when that happens???i suggest that you go with your heart...if you really want to be with the other guy then go for it...but just remember you are taking a big chance... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Jen, Beautiful poem...and I have so been there...this poem is like deja vu. All I can tell you is what everyone else did...follow your heart. No matter how things end up it'll be okay.  Love, Angel< !signature--> Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Diddo to them up there, and great poem  ! |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I can't say that I've ever been in this situation, so I won't give you any 'empty' advice. But I liked your poem! It was very beautiful. Great job! And good luck. *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I'm in the same boat as LyricFetish, but I enjoyed your poem IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thanx for the advice guys but its ahrd to listen to my heart when its speaking jibberish!!! im too confused!  Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~ The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Like.......Whoa!!! I do agree with Erin...but let me add another advice. Makes sure you take your time before you decide. I know this poem is like 2 months old, and I'd like to know whta happened. So, keep in touch will ya. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job and keep on writing.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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