Teen Poetry #3 |
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The Poem I Wanted To Write |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
I want to write you a poem That would make you cry Somthing that would make you smile And want me close by A poem that had meaning to you Somthing that touched your heart And would make you vow Never to split us apart I want it to express what I feel about you And somthing I can be proud for Also somthing that'll make you love me even more Somthing that would let you know How much I love you And that I never Want you to go I'm having trouble though And don't know what to say I've got all thee feelings inside And they keep building up day by day So I ask one favor Help me get these feelings out And take me by the hand To a different route ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this poem, it creatively descibes everything that you want to say. Nice job ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You wanna know the truth? I think this is what your wanting to do. I think you just wrote the poem that you're wishing to write. This is one of the sweetest poems I've ever read in passions. keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great. GOod job ![]() "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey! Another great poem!! You definately express how much you love him in this one. You get your point out loud and clear. Keep em coming! |
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since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was sweet, and I liked the idea. Good work!! Happy writing.. ~Carly The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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