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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-10-22 09:49 AM

Ok, me and my boyfriend have been together a lil over a month now, but b4 he and I got together, I was with someone else, who cam into school one morning to break it off with me. And as you can imagine, I started bawling, and as soon as Justin saw my tears, he walked with me, and helped me, just like he always had when I was having problems with Irvin.  They sent me home from school, bcuz I was “mentally unstable”, but that night, as soon as he had the chance, Justin called me. 

Its only been a month,
But its been a great 4 weeks

Even before then
You had my heart

You were always the one
I talked to about him

You became my best friend
But I still wanted  more

There were so many tymes
When I just wanted to kiss you

I didn’t care that I was “with” him
Whenever I was around you.

(why is the explaination longer than the poem itself?)

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2000-10-22 11:33 AM

Hey hun! Great poem. I think that its so great how your now with Justin. Like you said he was always there for you and you wanted to be with him while with Irving so it must be right. I'm very happy for you and i wish you both the best =o) Great poem and keep em comin!

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

2 posted 2000-10-22 12:16 PM

I'm happy for you Tamma

It must be great to have someone in your life. And think about it... only a month... the best is coming.
Your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-22 12:57 PM

Poems don't have to be long to be good, this one's a great example

I hope everything stays great with you and Justin

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2000-10-22 01:31 PM

Hey. This was great, so sweet...good work. Stay cool, and happy writing..

~Carly

The people walking in darkness
have seen a great light;
on those living in the land of the shadow of death
a light has dawned.
~Isaiah 9:1-2

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