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A wish that will never come true
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A wish that will never come true |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I wish you were here with me I wish you were here and could see I wish you were here for me. I wish all these things and they'll Never come true Cause in all honesty neither Will you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well, this one's really good, but one question that came to my mind is: are you saying she won't come true because it just can't happen or because it's a dream or what? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Little, yet so heartfelt...great job..happy writing.... The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
both parts of what you ask take place here i can't have her because she's gone but she still lives in my dreams but no longer in reality. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
jeremiah.........no words..... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this was short, but to the point. I liked it.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Jeremiah, I know how you feel. I have had several "wishes" that could never come true. It never gets any easier, but I realize that if it doesn't happen, it isn't meant to be. Don't spend so much time longing for the past that you can't look towards the future. Best of luck! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This made me cry...and so did your signature. I haven't talked to you in a while and I missed you. Wish I could heal your pain. ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
short sweet wonderfull heck u got the whole damn thing rocking i love it and hope to see a lot more "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Love your work as always... ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
superb ending. What else can I say oh master?  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Really sad. I'm sorry this wish cannot come true.  I hope you feel better now.Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 03-16-2001).] |
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