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Teen Poetry #3

2:24 (a senryu)

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

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On the streets w/ people

0 posted 2000-09-18 12:33 PM

2:24

Red light in darkness
keeping me awake tonight
showing endless time

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-09-18 07:08 PM

Excellent Senyru Lakewalker! That little alarm clock surely has it's way ... wonderful impact in so few words, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Euclid the Kid
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since 2000-07-15

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Eugene,Oregon

2 posted 2000-09-18 08:47 PM

This is real neat-dang those sleepless nights! Dean

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-09-19 02:59 PM

Thank you for the replies

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

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Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-03-22 07:54 AM

I remember this one. Library.

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2001-03-22 05:57 PM

Wowza Allen, thanks for the reply!

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
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