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What I'm Gonna Do To You...
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What I'm Gonna Do To You... |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey all!! It's been a while!! Sorry, I've been busy! forgive me!? I would liket to take your heart and play a game I want for you to hurt-as I did just the same You lied to me and made me believe you cared Truth is, you'll never know the pain I beared I want break your heart into a milltion pieces I want to break your life so that your happiness ceases Want to drag your 'clean, good' name through the dirt I want you to scream and yell and tell me how much it hurts Want to rape your innocence and make you see All the pain inside, the burning tears-ALL of me When you look at the stars do you see the baby you killed? Because of your actions, mine was the heart I had to re-build Crying, now on your deathbed realizing the consequences of your sin You killed your little girl, you killed me...deep within... *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow...this poem was amazing and just bursting with emotion. I liked it a lot..great job!! Want to rape your innocence and make you see All the pain inside, the burning tears-ALL of me |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I've got issues with this one...it was well written though..happy writing... ~Carly The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is powerful and I like how it's written! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is great and i like it.....but i don't know about this hateful attitude. Obviously that's not the way to solve thing, but i do know what you're going through. Been there and I've written some pretty mean poems. So yea but it kicked butt.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Everytime i read a poem you'e written about your dad, I just seem to see so much pain in you. I just wanna find an answer to help you go thru this. You are a sweet girl, and I don't want to see you in so much pain. If there is anything I could do, just tell me. You know I'll always be here for you even just to lend an ear. keep ya head up swetness I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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