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Teen Poetry #3

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-10-20 04:31 PM

Press On:

Let her move on.
Let her fly away.
To hell with past.
To hell with day.

I live in the night.
I cry for bliss.
It's gone forever.
The love I miss.

I must focus.
I must press straight.
The move on blues.
The tear of hate.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Morouxshi San
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-10-20 04:38 PM

well dope i hope you dont think that i am only liking your straight forward poems, i love your symbolism too...
youre a great writter in both styles.

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-10-20 05:47 PM

"the move on blues"
That line is a really great way to put those feelings. This poem is another great one

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

3 posted 2000-10-20 06:30 PM

Hey man. Great job...happy writing...stay cool...

~Carly

The people walking in darkness
have seen a great light;
on those living in the land of the shadow of death
a light has dawned.
~Isaiah 9:1-2

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