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Teen Poetry #3

Times Dim Future

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-10-19 07:21 PM

Times Dim Future:

Onward time!
On with your ticks!
Onward time!
The silence of your clicks.

Rushing along nothingness.
It's life that I waste.
The time I miss.
The future I taste.

Onward time!
There goes my day.
Onward time!
I stare in dismay.

Tears are lost.
The soul I trim.
Insidious frost.
The future is dim.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-10-19 09:28 PM

Hey man. This is too cool. Once again, a great piece of work. If you die, can I have your talent????

~Carly

I'm nobody, who are you?
Are you nobody too?
Then theres a pair of us-dont tell!
They'd banish us, you know...

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-10-19 09:38 PM

Dopey, it seems time is always working against us, doesn't it

Well, great poem.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

3 posted 2000-10-19 10:08 PM

Oooooooh purty! nice work

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

4 posted 2000-10-19 10:37 PM

you knwo this is great so i dont; have to tell you

YOU ROCK!

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-10-20 03:49 PM

Well thanks everybody....bumping it up only once now to see if anybody else would reply. Anyway thanks for the replies, much appreciated.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Morouxshi San
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-10-20 06:17 PM

very good poem.
time is so limiting.

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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