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So special? |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
What makes me above others, And you pressed against the ground? I'm too special for you? Do you know how ridiculous that sounds? Your telling me you dont deserve, Someone to treat you right. Who loves you for who your are, Desire's your company day and night, Whose love for you is pure, And your love back is the only thing, She wishes upon a star to endure? You under estimate yourself boy, In millions of ways. If you think this highly of me, And poorly of you. How have we stayed friends till this day? I think you've got me all wrong, I'm just your ordinary girl. Your best friend maybe, But not the queen of the world. So you have a twisted perception of me, I dont think we've met. My name is michele, The girl who has this invision of you and her, And better yet. The Girl who fell in love with you, For your goofy smile. Who finds your presence worth while. I know none of this you believe, It's bouncing off of you. But even if you dont believe that this is how i feel, Just know, Somewhere in your heart or back of your mind, That it's nothing but true. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow....very nicely penned i must say....i loved the rhyme. keep up the great work. salma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These are great thoughts! Did you share this with the person you were writing it to? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job..... i like the message and you should just tell the person it's about what you feel.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
The person needs to read this. It's very good. I hope everything works out for you. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
very good poem.  i think we mostly agree the person should read it... San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This poem is wonderful. I absoulty looooved it! I like the way you rymed and it seemed to flow. You're telling me you don't deserve Somone to treat you right Who loves you for who you are Desires your company day and night I love it!!! ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Shugar~ This was amazing!!!Whoever this person is needs to read this...Tell them what you are feeling...Dont let them slip away...Keep up the good work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wow.....this is good, i mean this is really good!!! One thing though Michele, you might not seem that special to yourself, but it doesn't mean that to someone you're not gonna be everything. You probably are everything to him...and he's scared of that. Do you get where i'm going at with this? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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