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peanogrl83
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0 posted 2000-10-19 10:21 PM


Bluch. Bluch bluch bluch.

Vreni


Let Me Alone

All I do wrong is inconsequential
You say it’s too late, I’ve no potential.
I grin, laugh wryly, as you scream,
Slowly pick apart my life at the seams.
The disruption of my ego rather tickles,
A distraction of thoughts so purely fickle.
I ignore it all, come through with a smile,
Your blood pressure rising all the while.
You search for a way, just to get through,
The voices in my head who disregard you.
Please don’t instruct me on how I should be,
I’ve no desire to change, I’m quite fond of me.
I’ve been myself, none other, all this time
Irreverent to your wishes, the worst of crimes.
Just run along, concern yourself for a change,
Leave my insanity up to me, let me be strange.


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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-10-19 10:54 PM


Oh, I love the attitude in this!  It really says I'm me and that's the way it's gonna be.  I like it

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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2 posted 2000-10-20 09:33 AM


I like this one...To me it sounds like you are saying "you are the person you want to be and if someone doesnt like it oh well"...Thats my opinion at least...Good one though...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-10-20 03:51 PM


being strange is good and yep.....so good job on staying that way



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-10-20 03:52 PM


being strange is good and yep.....so good job on staying that way



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-10-20 03:52 PM


being strange is good and yep.....so good job on staying that way



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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