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In my dreams...
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In my dreams... |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC 
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Only in my dreams can I believe it's true To me this type of feeling is so brand new My life was incomplete until the day that I met you I haven't known you for a very long time But I know that I cant' live without you in my life You're all that I want You're all that I need Every time I'm near you it's like destiny You're my plain jane and my beauty queen I'm so infected by your vanity You're smile is my drug You're kiss is my dream I live just to hold you,take you under my wing I know that I'm babbling like some poor sprung sap But I can't help it when your love's on attack This is one beating that I'm willing to take Cause I know you'll never hurt me, my heart will never break Love's an emotion that you just can't hide With you I'm not afraid to show my softer side You make me comfortable,I let down my guard Being real with you is so far from hard Too many times I've let love slip away But I'm staying here till my dying day You've changed my life You've changed my heart Being away from you is the hardest part Now the days are too short And the nights are too long I lie awake and wish that you weren't gone I slowly relax, and I start to dream and I fall asleep knowing that you love me |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"I know that I'm babbling like some poor sprung sap But I can't help it when your love's on attack" I like that, love's on attack. great words you chose for this peom  or did they choose you to write them? Anyway, nice poem, I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ahh this was so cool. Brought smiles to my face. This is one lucky lucky relationship you've got. Stay koo, and happy writing!! ~Carly I'm nobody, who are you? Are you nobody too? Then theres a pair of us-dont tell! They'd banish us, you know... |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Thanx, but the sad part is that it isn't even a relationship right now. It's been on and off, but she knows how I feel, and I know how she feels, it just needs to progress from there. Keoni |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this was good and good luck with this girl dude. Hope it works out!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You say you cant live without her??? So its not really sad if yous are just on and off...Wouldnt you rather have it that way...Then yous not being together at all??? ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Yeah, I know Erin, it just gets oldbeing the center one minute and put on the back burner the next. I love her and I will get her back for good. She's the only one holding back. She's not ready to commit. Her friends tell her, even her parents tell her, she'll come back Keoni |
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