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Teen Poetry #3

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Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-10-19 09:16 PM

Hey everyone! For the past month of so I have not been able to find ANYTHING to write about. But, alas, I was inspired! I just wrote like 4 new poems, only one of which I can post-- they will only cause controversy so I will not post them. But here is the one that I CAN post! Enjoy!

~*Golden*~
You were my hero
in my dream last night.
You rescued me
when I was alone and in fright.

Just as you have
so often in real life,
Saving me from
confusion and strife.

You have given me strength
to deal with my pain.
Through it all,
you help me stay sane.

Always there for me,
you shine like gold--
Someone to lean on,
a hand for me to hold.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-10-19 09:24 PM

Hey. Great poem you have here!! Glad you found some inspiration!! Happy writing!

~Carly

I'm nobody, who are you?
Are you nobody too?
Then theres a pair of us-dont tell!
They'd banish us, you know...

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-19 09:26 PM

Glad you got back your tick for your tock. Anyway the poem was sweet and nice. Sweet and nice is good......hehe bye!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-19 10:49 PM

I really like this one, it has a good feeling to it. I dont know, for some reason I liked it when you said:
"Just as you have
so often in real life,"
It sounds good......nice work

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2000-10-24 06:02 PM

welcome back girl. Don't worry about writer's block, cause I have one too right now. I hope this dream is actually events of what has actually transpired in your life. keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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