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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
You walk out the door Feeling no pain Only I feel like Everything is blowing up in my face You have no clue that I am crying Tears came with each happy memory Which only brings more pain And pain brings more tears How could you do this to me? I have no clue what I did If only you could tell me But you won't even speak to me You shrug me off like I was nobody Like I was someone you met just yesterday I don't know what to do or say How do I deal with this pain? Don't you know You meant everything to me Do you know how much I love you Do you know how much I care Did you really care about me Or was I just part of your game I thought that you were different But now I see I was wrong Guys are all the same. Come and show me that I'm wrong Prove that you are different I am asking you this is for mankind Can't you be the one Who doesn't play a game Come back to me Or I will never be the same For I have never loved someone so great As I have loved you Don't you see I want to be with you forever? Because I love you my sweetheart. < !signature--> I live in the present but yearn for the past... yet the future is so very near [This message has been edited by sweetypie5 (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
hey steph, I'm sorry you have to go through this. But i know what you are going through, cuz you told me about it!! I hope everything works out well for you, just remember love is tough, but life goes on. Well your poem was really beatiful, did you give it to him yet??? Great work, keep writing!! Luv ya, Priscilla ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well the thoughts were expressed well enough to see that you were in an immense amount of pain. BAD BAD! I don't like to see people in depression and such. Eneh Weh...... I'd like to just point out a line that kinda ticked me off "Guys are all the same" yea well......im sure you can already guess what im about to say so i won't even say it. Just interpret that. I, on the otherhand, do understand where you are coming from and do not take offense to it. I just hope you wrote it for the moment and do not seriously praise that view point. Eneh weh...bye Good job! POST MORE! HURA!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you really expressed your thoughts well with this poem, well done. "But you on't even speak to me You shrug me off like I was nobody" That should be "won't", but this part makes me think this guy is a jerk. He won't even tell you why he left??? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im sorry that you have to be going through this especially not knowing the reasons its happening. I can imagine it leaves you with a feeling of emptiness inside. I hope he realizes what he gave up and comes to his senses and comes back to you! "Or was I just part of your game I thought that you were different But now I see I was wrong Guys are all the same." I shur hope all guys arent the same.. |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Hey thanx for replying to my poem... let me just say that the line "guys are all the same" was a thing of the moment! I know guys are not all the same. I know this from experience but at the time I felt that! Once again thanx for repling to my poem! I live in the present but yearn for the past... yet the future is so very near |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very well expressed emotions. I just hate seeing people in such pain. If I was only "J. Coffey" from "Green Mile", I'd take away everyone's pain from them  One thing though, I don't think all guys are the same. Cause if you haven't noticed, a lot of the guys in here are going thru the same experiences as you are. If you don't believe me, go thru all my poems and you'll realize what I mean Keep ya head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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