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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Although you're far away I see you every night Right here beside me As I turn off the light I see you in my dreams And I feel your gentle touch I hear your gentle voice God, I miss you so much! I've been going crazy Since the day you went It took courage not to break down And now my courage is spent Every tear I cry Is a tear of sorrow I miss you oh so much! Please come back tomorrow! Written for my husband, who is currently in Texas ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oooooh, you miss the guy, how cute. Nicely written emotions  ...and when are you expecting him back? soon????< !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A Husband huh? Yea those do tend to take a toll on wives when they leave......that is....if the wives love their husbands haha, which you do! Wah00! good job!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey!! Great poem here. Stay strong till he returns... ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I hope when he comes back it's a happy joyous reunion! You sound like you miss him a lot. Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very well written!!! Put it this way, the more you miss him, the better the reunion would be Keep writing and sharingI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks all...I do miss him an awful lot..he called me this morning and said he hs no idea when he's coming home possibly thursday though...*sigh* he's been gone since Sunday...I wrote him this, and I am going to show him when he gets home. I hope he likes it! I still miss him like crazy also  ~*~SCG~*~ |
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