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Im sorry(please read......) |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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When ever something bad happens it always happens to me, I think I fell in love with another guy it ruins a new found friendship All I wanted was some advice but now you won't even answer I don't understand, I'm hurting in my heart and you won't help Maybe I forgot that it'd my fault and there are conquescences, but maybe I was wrong and friendships are not suppose to last You may hate me, loath me, disrespect me,be disgusted but I will stand and take what insults and anger you have against me, and when I crumble to the ground and nothing is left but dust Then remember u never listened only judged I'm sorry and I don't know why But please don't ignore me anymore. ~Ina~ "There is no money,there is no possesions, only obbessions, take my money, take my money..I dont need that S***T.." ~Papa Roach Between insects and a |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was really good. I think the worst thing that can happen after something goes wrong is being ignored...well good luck with this problem...happy writing... ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is a good poem. Only weak minded people ignore others after things go wrong rather than fixing them. Hope things get better Keoni |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job in writing the poem and its true what keoenoenoe said about the weak minded people (go him/her!).....but yea...just keep that head up mmmmmkay?!?!? mmmmkay!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is exelent writting. I've read a couple of your posts today and I must say you do a wonderful job of telling a story. you should concider writting a short novel or something. hope every thing works out "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You got this out and onto paper extremly well, I like how it's written. Very good poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Yes, it is indeed an excellent poem! Very well written and spoken from the heart. I hope things get better for ya! Keep your chin up and a smile on your face!  |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Great poem!! I'm sorry you're going through this...but keep your head up ok? And SMILE! Bel |
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