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The Path |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
When i was born my path was clear, but it changed over the years to become quite unclear and more Distant then near. So many choices not knowing which one's to fear. Once i chose the wrong one and ended up with a bad dear. But now i can't do wrong as long as i have the good ones here. Now that i have chosen the right path I'll be glad until the day the last paths pass. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I love that kind of attitude. That's the state of mind you need to be in man!!! You are so very right abou paths. Simply by taking the rigth path and sticking to it, you're garunteed the upsides of life. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
i've read a lot of your poetry,and i think you are very talented....paths are very hard to choose,i hope when it comes my time i'll go the right way.. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I too have read all of your work and it seems to me you are very talented in the many forms of writing! I love this poem as it conveys a particular attitude that few of us chose to acknowledge. Thanks for sharing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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