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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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You asked me why I'll talk to anyone, just as long as they will try to understand. And I didn't know quite what to say, I just glanced at my torn hands/ But now I know the reason of why, I want people to know the me that is inside, and I guess I shoud probably tell you, or should I? I think it's because when my life, to a turn for the worse, I couldn't say, the things that needed to come out, that would take the pain away. I didn't want to admit a thing, wasn't perfect in my life, but then again, I didn't want to deal with the strife. You asked me why I wanted the world, to know what I was going through. And I guess the answer was because, I really wanted to just tell you. That atleast you are still alive, and your life is still together, but dreams can be shattered, even if the float just like a feather, in the breath of wind, we all call this journey, through life. ----------------------------------------------------hmmmmmmmmm Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think the way you expressed your feelings here is very good. I like the poem, it's well done. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
the poems message was nice, we should all express ourselves to the fullest with people, but only people we trust. bye  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Allysa~ You opened yourself up and told us a little bit about you in this one...You did a good job expressing what you had to say...Keep it up!!!Cant wait to see more... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks all for replying. If you want to know the story behind this, well, it has to do with Jesica. I didn't really talk about how I felt when it happened, so this weekend I really opened up and a lot of ppl have nbever seen this side of me before, so they were surprised. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
**Bumpin this so ya all can see who I really am** Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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