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IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

0 posted 2000-10-15 10:28 PM

LIFE
a glourious thing
but
DEATH
I'm guaranteeing

it WILL  end

but
  before
    it does
I
need
to find peace

before
      I go
I wanna
    know
how
do I
find
  strenth
    to grow

some
  look
   to god...
but faith
   I
  can not
        find
I
wish
   I could...
somehow
  be that
     blind
where
   can I...
find
  peace
    of
   mind?

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~
"I am, who I am
and what you think,
I don't give a damn"
Chilli Peppers

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-10-15 11:09 PM

this was great! I liked this one a LOT. very orignal and great all together. keep it up, you know i like your work.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

2 posted 2000-10-16 11:23 AM

Thnx a lot
that means alot.
I actually added a bit to this poem since I poseted it:

In my soul?
I'll
  look
    again
but last I looked
I
only
  found sin

search my heart?
maybe
a
  tad
but every thing there
makes
me
  sad

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~
"I am, who I am
and what you think,
I don't give a damn"
Chilli Peppers

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-16 12:31 PM

I like the poem, and the addition. It's very good!

  I really like this part:
"before
      I go
I wanna
    know
how
do I
find
  strenth
    to grow"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2000-10-16 03:18 PM

Hey!! I loved this. The way the words were spaced out really added to the cool factor. hehe. great work, happy writing!!

~Carly

"I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper.

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

5 posted 2000-10-17 06:22 AM

thank you both. you are very kind

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~
"I am, who I am
and what you think,
I don't give a damn"
Chilli Peppers

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