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Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

0 posted 2000-10-14 07:13 PM

Unanswered questions
Prayers left on deaf ears
Criticized actions
Life is full of tears

Surrounded by secrets
Two faced friends
Surrounded by lies
Waiting for all to end

Feelings full of anger
Feelings full of hate
But still loving her
Though all is too late

Head facing the grounds
Hands I raise to the sky
Happiness can't be found
All I can do is cry

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-10-14 07:23 PM

Acire~
I realized that crying helps somewhat...It gets the pain out for a little bit at least...Keep up the good work buddy!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-10-14 07:30 PM

This poem is really good, it flows well and has a real feeling behind it. Nice work

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2000-10-14 10:39 PM

great poem, gave me a sense of picture. good job painting your sorrow

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I Got a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

4 posted 2000-10-15 05:42 PM

that was excellent!! I really liked that. i think you have some real talent, keep up the great work!

Much Love,
Priscilla

~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

5 posted 2000-10-15 05:48 PM

Hey acire this was great!! I loved it. You really have talent!!!!

~Carly

"I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-10-15 08:13 PM

the ending is really sad, but i liked it a lot good job!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

7 posted 2000-10-24 04:44 PM

aww babe this was sad. you need a double dose of cheering up

you know you can talk to me ANYtime! and dont ever giveup on yourself..shes out there..somewhere...

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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