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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
The days are long and tiring, My world is fading away into this distance. I use to think i made an impact, Somehow to the people in this world. But now i feel i'd do myself a favor, By ending my insignificant existance. You can tell me that i'm needed, I'm special and that you care. Your words will flow throughout my mind. For all the upcoming years. But they are just words said, Not felt by me within. I sadly look forward to the day marking the end of my life, Cause to tell you the truth, I was never really ready for it to begin. I cant even remember the amount of times, I was told, "Do whats best for you", Well it seems in every case thats arroused in my life but this, That quote was marked to be true. Have you ever felt so lonely? So lonely you could die? I've adapted to being so lonely, Over time I lost my energy to try. I now realize, Not everyone was fit to live like a queen. No matter how great, Your hopes or aspirations may be. Dont hate me, For seeing out, My brutal day dream. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The emotions behind this and how it's written make this a strong poem. I don't like the feelings expressed though, and if you really feel this way I'm sorry. "I use to think i made an impact, Somehow to the people in this world." You do make an impact and always will. But anyway, very well written poem!!  < !signature--> "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow you expressed some deep emotions...Good work...Wish I could express myself as you did... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done, you expressed yourself well!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. All I can say is wow. This was definitely one of my faves, probably cuz I can relate to it so well. Terrific job...happy writing... "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Id like to reply to this once again....... the emotions in this poem were deep as hell. I just hope you are ok and everything turns out for the best. "I know i was meant for this world" - SP "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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