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~*Meghan*~
Junior Member

since 2000-05-22

Posts 17

0 posted 2000-10-15 02:58 PM

I havn't really told you,
because I didn't exactly know how.

I don't think I could ever show you,
because I don't know how to express it.

I thought that you should know though,
the way that I do feel.

That ever since I've known you,
our friendship is so real.

Knowing you like this,
has changed my point of view.

Our friendship means so much to me,
and I'll never stop loving you.

Trusting you with my life,
I tell you everything.

Knowing you like this,
makes me want to sing.

I feel our hearts combine,
and our realtionship is true.

Knowing you like this,
makes me want to be with you.

I see you all alone,
I often wonder why?

I catch you look at me,
I often want to cry.

Your eyes are so trusting,
your face so caring and kind.

Your hand is the hand that holds me,
each time I sit and cry.

Knowing you like this,
makes me feel so real.

Knowing you like this,
makes this a better world.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-10-15 03:04 PM

Hey! This was really good! It's great you have the privelage to know someone so special. Happy writing!!

~Carly

"I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-10-15 04:14 PM

This is a really nice poem, I like it

I really like this part:

"Knowing you like this,
makes me feel so real."

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-10-15 06:25 PM

Lovely thoughts Meghan, and very nicely composed ... wonderful rhyming scheme!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-10-15 07:44 PM

Well i liked the poem....great job!
But these lines make me laugh

"Knowing you like this,
makes me want to sing."

not laughing in the sense that it was bad...but in the sense that i could just envision you sing because you know the guy. I thought the mental picture was funny. Something we'd see in a nice little musical. Good job though!!!
hope to see more!!!!!!!!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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