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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-06-26 01:12 AM

I think I wrote this when I was 15.

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The cry I heard;
it was not there.
I listened again.
But only I was here.
I felt so lost,
so empty, so gone.
I felt that none
of my achievemnets were done.
The empty air
that I sat in
just occupied space.
That space was so thin.
I cried and cried.
It echoed so long.
I thought I was living,
but I was wrong.
All of the things
I thought I had learned
were just a mirage,
now suddenly burned.
Yes, I was dying.
My life was done.
My every experience
was wasted and gone.

Jeremy D. Halstead

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-26 01:27 AM

i love your words and the expression you put behind them. hope to read more today.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Vball Chickie1624
Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 116
New York

2 posted 2000-06-26 11:08 AM

This is a great poem....as the rest of them! Good feeling and expression in it. Keep writing and have fun.

Luv ya,
Danielle

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do."

"The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say."
- Anais Nin

"Follow your own heart, not others."

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

3 posted 2000-06-26 03:41 PM

Jeremy~Wonderful poem just as all the others! Goes to show us that evern back in the day you were a very talented writer!
You always have and I guess always will have a very special relationship with words that no one ekse can accomplish!Keep it up!

Love Always~*~Pryncess Jess~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

~Night_Mist~
Junior Member

since 2000-06-24

Posts 31
Calgary, AB Canada

4 posted 2000-06-26 04:23 PM

Hey:
Loved your poem. Good selection of words. Keep writing.
Luv, ~Night_Mist~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-18 03:30 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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