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An Artist |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
An artist sits, brush in hand, radio turned up, playing his favorite band. Singing along, brush dipping in paint, he starts a single line, shadowed and faint. Slowly taking shape, the tree's start to rise, along with flowers and birds, waterfalls and butterflies. Sun shining brightly, upon animals large and small, into its splender, your soul can't help but fall. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful poem. I can't help but fall in love with this picture you have painted with your words!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i love the way you use your words to paint a picture with imagrey. great work and keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
I like the atmosphere you create with your words...the last line is intruiging, I think I understand... Keep posting!! "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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