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Losing You |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
As you hang up I shed a tear I know that you are mad I can't help the things I said I try to call you back But you won't even answer the phone I start to think maybe this is the end We have been through to much For it to end this way So please say you'll stay The very next day I pull you aside And ask you how you could act Like everything is fine I look into your eyes And see a tear form Please don't cry I whisper It will only bring more pain You start to tell me it can't be But I shut you up again If we try to work it out Our relationship will be saved Because this is not the first or last Fight that we will be in We'll hear a lot more of I saw you look at her And how could you even think about cheating I love you to much to let you go So please stay... Hey This is me and my work so I hpoe you like it??? |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Hey, Welcome to Passions. You'll find here people that can help you out a lot, I have made so many friends here, so whenever you want just send me an email or an ICQ message. Well, what can I say, great first post, I really liked the poem. But I don't know much about the background of it, so maybe you could email me. Great first post, and hope to see you again soon. Bye, your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Awwww....I've had that happen to me a few times....it sucks...I hope it goes well...great poem and welcome to passions.. Dark Star |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Well, you've come to the right place, sweetypie! Everyone in here can definately relate to this situation, and I know how much it sucks. Here, consider yourself virtually hugged. Really nice poem, hope you stick around! Peace. *~Meredith~* I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Welcom to Passions  This was a great first post. And from what im comprehending, your bf cheated on you, you got in a fight, said some mean stuff and now you feel bad?? I've been there plenty of times..you shoudlnt feel bad, he should be begging for your forgiveness, you didnt do a thing ..dont put yourself into the position of reparing your relationship because he did the wrong here. lol ok theres my advice keep up te great work~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!!I hope that you enjoy it here as much as I do... Good first post...I hope that you share more of your work with us!!!  ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Hey Steph!! Great poem, things will all work out, if you give them time, just keep ur head up till then. Well nice work, Keep writing! LYLAS, Priscilla< !signature--> ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I think you did a wonderful job of expressing this situation, and I hope everything works the way you want it to. Please keep sharing your poems with us "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Welcome to Passions!!! You expressed your feelings so well in your first post. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. So, please keep shring. Keep ya head up ok I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Thanx for replying to thie poem!!! I really didn't think to put a background on it so here is one now! Right now my b/f and i are fine. We were on the verge of breaking up over some pretty stupid stuff. I gave him this poem to read and it was like you really feel this way??? And now we both try harder to make stuff work so it's all okay now I guess! I live in the present but yearn for the past... yet the future is so very near |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Hey peeps please repl to this poem! K??? Thanx When boys are four they will give you thier gum, but when they are forteen they won't even give you the time of day... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great. Yea relationships are hard to keep going but when you find the right person you have a better chance of prevailing. Good luck and i hope things stay fine!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Great first post. I really liked it. I can totally understand, relationships can be hard and full of pain. great poem Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey gurl!! Welcome to passions!! First off...great first post!! I am really relieved to hear that everything is fine between you and your BF now. Sometimes it just takes a small reminder to let them know how much you really do care...and thats what this is! thank god for poems huh?? Great job and i cant wait to see more! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions SweetyPie! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. You've expressed yourself well in this first post. I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Its great that everything turned well for you and that was something that I think a lot of people can relate to as well. |
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