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Dear Boy, |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA 
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Dear Boy, I can’t take this pain any longer To get on with my life, I will have to be stronger It’s not your fault you don’t feel the same way But I was hoping you could some day But that day isn’t coming, this I know So I’m moving on, I’m letting go It won’t be easy, but I’ve done it before But each time, it only seems to hurt more I now know why it’s called heart ache Because right now, it feels like my heart really is about to break All this pain and fear I feel inside I know I will have to try to hide Only time can heal my pain Some day I will love again But right now all I can do is cry Well that’s it for now, so good-bye. ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have this gift on writing your emotions. Seems like all your poems are just really dug from within and expressed with such emotion. keep your head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is great and i simply love the ending. Great job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
WOW i can totally relate! this was a great poem and heartache sucks but eventually it passes. but it's the long term effects that build up.  Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey! Great poem...I too can relate to this poem. Sometimes its hard to let go of something that you truely love but it all works out in the end. Good job! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so good! It's very well expressed as acire said. Keep writing "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Monica Ash Junior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 17 |
This is a GREAT Poem I too sometimes feel like this have you told this boy yet???? When i told the boy it made me feel better,but check out my 2 new poems Loving Willy and Remembering the night we ment and tell me what you tink!!!!!Please. Monica |
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Monica Ash Junior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 17 |
This is a GREAT Poem I too sometimes feel like this have you told this boy yet???? When i told the boy it made me feel better,but check out my 2 new poems Loving Willy and Remembering the night we ment and tell me what you tink!!!!!Please. Monica |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Sweetstuff~ Good one!!!I really liked this one...Really creative...Hope to see more like this!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Wow That was deep! Gosh I know hat you are going through cuz you've told me all about it!!!! I'm your best friend in case you haven't relized!!! I love your poems! Keep writing! I live in the present but yearn for the past... yet the future is so very near |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
yes, Steph, I did know you are my best friend lol. I know you know, b/c we are ALWAYS complaining about our problems!!< !signature--> ~*~YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt.~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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