Teen Poetry #3 |
Not worthy |
jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
For all of heaven is watching from above, While I search for my one true love, Shall I be eager?, Will I be ready?, Or will she look upon me as a freaak with a machite. I want to love but i'm scared, Of this and that stuff that is still unaware, Why do I wake up at night when I hear a crickle?, Why will I be 22 with wrinkles?!. To tell the truth I worry to much, I just need something to give me a rush, For I have been down so low, Almost to the point of saying look out below, A strong man has no worries, Even so not even one quarry. A rich man has money and power, When he die the world stops for a hour. Yet for us the little people who get stepped on, I just get frustated and start calling people morons. My love waviers from time to time, Almost liek a prank valitne. I am not worthy and I know it, I just get nervous and blow it. How can a man preach or love, When all this time he was the shadow of the dove. (some people didn't liek the baby so I won't use it any more thank you) early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, but socially dead. |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
There is noone on this earth that is not worthy of love. You'll find your one true love jay...don't worry. In the end everyone does, it may take ur whole life, but you'll find her. Great poem. love, barb "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I would like to find her befroe I die early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, but socially dead. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey, you know, NOT being in love can be cool too. Cause you can focus on you instead of 'her'. ('him' in my case) Personally I'd rather be riding a wild roller coaster or eating a double scoop cone of mint chocolate chip ice cream than writing sonnets and maki g valentines. But, I know it's always nice to have that special someone when the mood is right. Good luck on finding your true love, and keep writing. *~Meredith~* I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks for the reply my life has always been about love I have the biggest heart so it is kind of hard when you live you life through you heart I go out but it just makes it funner for me when someone is with me expically some one I like or love early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, but socially dead. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm awful with advice. Truly I am. But maybe you're just looking to hard? I dunno. Anyway, nice poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks maybe I am I don't no early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, but socially dead. |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
I think Lakewalker has a point jay...I mean maybe you should stop looking so hard and maybe she'll come to you. You also maybe looking to far...try looking in front of you and see what you'll find. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Jytree- wow.. great poem i personally have never really been in love before but i know how great it is to be with someone. you will find the girl you have been looking for i assure you but until then dont; look so hard... she IS out there an dyou will know it when you find her good luck ~*Justine*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I hope you do get this girl without her looking upon you as a freak with a machete.......bye! "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
THANKS Dopey I hope you to early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. but socially dead. |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
This is a good poem! keep writing your a great poet! |
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