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Everything is Fake |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Everything is Fake: Hate me girls, And hate me boys. You're all I love, But still my toys. Hate me animals, And hate me plants. Nothing goes right. Not even romance. Hate me devil, And hate me God. I always screw up. Say yes and nod. Hate me false, And hate me true. Everything is fake. Even all of you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is a really unique poem! I liked it a lot! Great job!! "Hate me false, And hate me true. Everything is fake. Even all of you." |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very interesting POV dopey. I probably don't completely understand what you're saying by it, but it's creative. * keep it up... etc!*  Jenn< !signature--> "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What's a POV? I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
wow this poem was very different but i get where you're comin from! another great poem! Curlz |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey Javi. Great poem. Fake people are VERY not cool...way to express that...wooo okay well buhbye. happy writing!! ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Great poem, I liked it, I think it's kind of deep... Could you please explain me a little bit, I think that there must be more than what I get. Thanks, bye, your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dopey, wow. this can be sooooooo true sometimes. I like it!!!! See ya. Love you!!! Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm pretty sure POV is Point Of View, and I agree, it's very interesting. I like how this is written, it flows very well. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Wow this was great!!You fit all the words together like a puzzle. It was an awsome poem Dopey. Keep it up man!!  smiles  ¤poe¤Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
awww Dopey...i love it...and i luv ya... Tamma (ps im thinking about coming back )If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
hmmmmmmm, when I read this this morning, I had no idea it would apply to my life in a few hours. my head hurts so bad and the one person who understood me won't care if I tell him how my life sucks, so im gonna tell you. First, Justin and I broke up.Then, As you already know, a close friend of mine was murdered. A week later, my best friend switched schools. Now my other best friend might get kicked out of my school and another of my friends is dealing with drugs and the consiquences of taking them and getting caught. Along with that, for some odd reason, I wanted to jump off a bridge about a week ago, but I can't take care of my own probs now b/c I have to help my friends. they depend on me. And im only in jr. high (8) Ugggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg. So anyways, I relate to your poem more than I thought. I love you Dopey!!!!! More than you know!!!!! Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Allysa, im sorry you're going through all this stuff. It licks and i know it. We've all been through a lot of stuff and believe me, some even worse than you. Being in 8th grade is tough and so is the rest of the way. All i can say is to stay true to yourself and just keep going. I can't really say to keep your head up cuz sometimes the weight is just too low to even think about it. But just keep pressing on!! I love you and im glad you seem to kinda like me somewhat.....hehe.....makes me feel a bit special. Love you lots and smile for me babe.... "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Very intresting but good...Thanks for sharing... BTW...Whats with that quote about the socks??? ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Great work once again. This poem flows very nicely and shows your unique talent well Nice job bud talk to you soon!!~*Justine*~ |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
very good poem dope. very deep. i dont get the socks thing either... San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well san, i just wrote the socks thing in Puerto Rican history class and found it amusing......so yea. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I like the way your mind works. And you express some interesting views that I think alot of ppl, including my self, can relate to. I think your part of the minority that sees the majority for what it really is. A bunch of little puppets whose opinions can annoy you but in the big picture you know how petty they really are. I hope I'm not way out in right field here but this is what ran through my head after reading this. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I like the way your mind works. And you express some interesting views that I think alot of ppl, including my self, can relate to. I think your part of the minority that sees the majority for what it really is. A bunch of little puppets whose opinions can annoy you but in the big picture you know how petty they really are. I hope I'm not way out in right field here but this is what ran through my head after reading this. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well you're pretty right about that. I do "seem" to see thigns in a dif. light. You oughta read my other poems like...uh....the ones abotu society. but anyway thanks! "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
That is some deep work dopey if I wasn't on a computer I was appulad you but I think you get the point so Good job early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. but socially dead. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
dopey....i gotta say quite the unique piece you got here. very different, but nice as well. salma |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I know its about time I get off my lil butt and reply but now I found some time on a Saturday doin nothing and at the library =) I loved your poem it was great, not too complex not to hard and didn't go way over my head =) hehe what I'm getting at is that I know where you and your words are coming from but I Hope I don't sound too conceited and if I do I guess I have to go back to where I came from and start all over again =Þ btw your lil quote born myself and bla bla bla *can't think of it all off of the top of her head* my friend I used to work with likes it alot, she digs it and she's twice my age..anywho, keep up the good work, and I truly believe you are far more talented then me..hell I think everybody is far more talented then me.. Love, Kristen "Fear not my dear for I am forver here, never leaving never steering clear of any dangers that lie deep within your heart" ~moi~ [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Love the poem, and the way your mind works. My favorite part was Hate me false, And hate me true. Everything is fake. Even all of you. Keep up the great work.. -Stephanie |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
...I was wondering about the socks thing too, you just came up with it in class, I thought for for sure it had to be in a movie or something, but no, it just came out of that head of yours ...< !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
HAha lakewalker......yea well almost everything i do or say comes out of my own head.........cept some catch phrases from the movie Mall Rats......Snoochie Boochies!!! Ok so yea hehe..bye! "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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