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What did I do? |
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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
The morning she told me about you all i could do was cry a mommy at 16 what was she to do? in love with her boyfriend her tummy a slight swell my best friend threw away her childhood and all i could do was cry The afternoon you entered this world I snuck up to the bed your little hands waving through the air such a tiny person inspired so much love and the first time I held you in my arms I couldn't explain what came over me baby Brandon, such a darling godson The night they fell apart I watched you sleep your mommy and daddy screaming harsh words And as we sped away I could hear you crying It was over that night In his grief your father turned to me And although that night was so long ago I wonder if your mommy will ever forgive me Please know dear baby, I'm sorry if I aided in ruining your family "god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ok this is just a guess...But I am thinking that you betrayed your friend...Is that what it is???Sounds like a sticky situation you are in...That is if this is based on reality...Well thank you for sharing...I did enjoy it!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey....you seriosly shouldn't take the blame for what happened. It really seems like they were on their way down anyways. I'm sure you did what you thought was right and that's all you can do...that's commendable. Jeremy Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem was really sad. Damn....but it was good. I don't like to give advice so i won't. But i hope things get better.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Darling, The two of you have been best friends for almost four years now, friendship overcomes everything, and it easy to tell the two of you will be close for a long time. Friends always forgive eachother, if there frienship was anything to start with. I love you, my Queen EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem has a strong feeling behind it and it sounds like a tough situation. I hope everything works out for the best! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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