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Just Because |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Just because you said you're sorry, doesn't mean I will forgive. But I think that's what I need to do, because without you, I can't live. Just because you feel like, my dreams were all yours too. Doesn't mean that my dreams contain, perfect pictures of me and you. Just because they all seem great, when they really are nightmares. You only see the good things, not all my many scares. Just because you say you love me, doesn't mean that you do. But even if you don't, I'll always love you. --------------------------------------------------- Why is it so cold??? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
So hey whats up?!?! Yea the poem is nice and sweet. This one-sided love sucks though, but who's to say he doesn't love you either. I mean, i don't know the full story. But anyway, great job!.....it's cold cuz the global rotation axis has shifted 2 degrees to the left and the solar rays have concintrated more along the tropical regions at a greater heat rate than usual. Thats why! DUHHH!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
great poem, i know what you are feeling. Nice work, keep writing!! Luv, SweetStuff ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Huh?? You lost me when you started talking about the solar rays. Well, it's not cold anymore. I was sitting at my computer typing with gloves on. oh and thanks all for replying!!! Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
well done on a well written poem. I feel so bad for you. I hope you get thru this time in your life. Thanks for sharing this poem and please keep writing  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I understand where you are coming from. Life sucks sometimes, undoubtedly! But one day you'll find that one special person who lives for you and you for them, and it will all come together... at least that's what I am told! Keep writing! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks for replying to my poem!!! Love ya all!!!Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"Just because you said you're sorry, doesn't mean I will forgive." I really like how you started this poem, and it's all good. Well written emotions! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Lakewalker: thanks for replying to my poem. I'm glad you like it. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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