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Dear Friend |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Dear Friend, I need to tell you something, I dont know what to say. You see, I've slowly been fading away, By each passing day. Everything about life is killing me, One by one, Hitting me with a silent blow. I guess what i'm trying to say is, That i really want to go. I never wanted to leave you, Your the best thing in the world. But nothing lasts forever, I learned that as a little girl. I want to believe that i can be happy, But i doubt i ever will. Life is so bland and dark, Its lost all of its thrill. I've tried to make you understand, Throughout this hard long road. But i guess i couldnt express to you enough, That these just arent words told. Dont tell me to push it away, If i could then i'd be happy today. It's ruined my life, I can no longer fight back. I'm sorry, I just cant last. I'm weak, And my strength has faded away. I get overwhelmed, With the thoughts of the coming day. So you see my friend, Life's not all it seems. Not for me atleast, We can no longer fight this as a team. I'm going solo, And solo i must depart. But for you i leave, My dedicated heart. Your the most important thing to me, Know even when and if i leave, We could never be apart. Love, Michele |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I guess I feel kind of sad after reading this. That's just what the poem did for me. Is this relly how you feel? It's a very well written poem. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I have felt what this poem describes...one of those times I wish I didn't understand...Remember, you are not alone...stay strong... ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Damn girl are you reading my mind???Or my journal??? I pratically wrote my thoughts like this the other night...Life is just getting kinda hard and well I dont feel up to being happy anymore...I know what you are going through...You painted a picture so perfect...Keep it up!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
THis is wonderful......not the situation but the poem. I loved it, it called me. it said "javierrrrrrrrr" and i said"what?"..so you see, that's why i liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Nice writing... kinda sad, but sometimes that's life, ehh? I hope this isn't true to life, but if it is good luck fixing it all. Kudos! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
I know exactly how you feel girl, life isn't that easy and well when we don't want to deal with it we just don't want to deal with it. My situation is a little different from yours, my so-called best friend is ditching me, so in a way we kinda have something in common here. But try to stay strong and hold your head up high, and don't let the man get you down.   smiles  ¤poe¤Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed |
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