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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
I'm the tool of your desire hidden in your prison cell let me crawl back from the mire fighting back to you, parnel Your growing to naive for death appointed critic tells the rest leaving love, take your final breath retire me to your cold nest You know, you know, you know I'd rather die then be human forever or for an hour, i'll be your puppet back to earth to cower Daddy beat you but loved you too Daddy spread disease in you Fetus born with hate in your eyes I'd love you, to spread more lies cut me down, out of this old gown rape me rape me tame now eat me out this time, pound for pound drown me in your lake..your town You know, you know, you know I'd rather die then be human forever or for power, I'll be your puppet kill me in the next hour HUT TWO THREE FOUR! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! the clowns on parade the clowns mascerade rip off your face rip off your brain the clowns on parade -me |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, this is stunning....the harsh wording gave the effect of almost being slapped in the face...powerful work, well done!  *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the poem was really well written. "id rather die than be human" nice nice..........the whole thing was really good. i got this little song tune in my head while reading it. Nicely done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is great, I liked it. It sounded sort of like a song to me too. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Amazing poem. Well written my friend. "Your growing to naive for death appointed critic tells the rest leaving love, take your final breath retire me to your cold nest" I just cannot believe how some people could come up with such lines. Well done I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Holy smokes...My jaw is scraping across the floor. This was so incredible....whoa..whoa wow wow....whoa.... "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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